Today we showed our newly edited opening sequence to a few people
Mostly all of the feedback was good some of the comments were -
- The narrative all makes sense
- It is interesting especially the whole idea of the antidote being put in the brief case
- The way it ends with a bang! it would make you want to keep watching to see what will happen next.
- The cuts are tight and look good
- The angles are interesting like the close up of the bottle as Tina is looking at it
- The music is tense and sounds dark mainly at the start
Some improvements that could be made are
- To make the music slightly more tense when Theo is walking
Mostly all of the feedback was good some of the comments were -
- The narrative all makes sense
- It is interesting especially the whole idea of the antidote being put in the brief case
- The way it ends with a bang! it would make you want to keep watching to see what will happen next.
- The cuts are tight and look good
- The angles are interesting like the close up of the bottle as Tina is looking at it
- The music is tense and sounds dark mainly at the start
Some improvements that could be made are
- To make the music slightly more tense when Theo is walking
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