Audience Feedback Serena And Tina

Today we showed our newly edited opening sequence to a few people
Mostly all of the feedback was good some of the comments were -

- The narrative all makes sense
- It is interesting especially the whole idea of the antidote being put in the brief case
- The way it ends with a bang! it would make you want to keep watching to see what will happen next.
- The cuts are tight and look good
- The angles are interesting like the close up of the bottle as Tina is looking at it
- The music is tense and sounds dark mainly at the start

Some improvements that could be made are

- To make the music slightly more tense when Theo is walking

Audience feedback Serena and Tina

 

Today we received our first lot of feedback from our peers, firstly we cut out Theo's dialogue on the phone because we were told that it was hard to hear/understand what he was saying, overall we thought it wasn't necessary. We re-filmed the lab scenes to make  the narrative easier to understand. We used more lighting in the lab scenes. When we do the sound we will add a phone sound just at the end of the establishing shot, making a sound bridge. To make the scene of Theo walking at the end seem less like it is dragging on/too long we will put some credit there so we can direct the audiences attention as nothing major is happening.