Main Piece Version 1

[Tina's slow motion bullet idea]

-film title on side of bullet.

-shot of doctor falling to the floor [he has just been shot]

-cut to an extreme close up of doctors lifeless eyes.

[rewind all of our footage to the beginning of the story]

[the beginning of the story]
-inside a science laboratory, three scientists are working on a special formula
{wearing lab coats and lab goggles}

-scientist 1 writes up some calculations before saying  "I think I've cracked it"

-retrieves a vial of black liquid from a the store room and adds a drop to the main formula vial.

-formula is finished.

-sound of a car pulling up outside the laboratory causes the scientists to get into a panic

-scientists carefully put it into 3 vials and put those into a foam lined briefcase.

-close up of man getting out of car outside lab [close up of door opening, and feet hitting the floor]

-scientist 1 removes lab coat and goggles and gets his own coat and hat on

-exits via the rear of the building with the briefcase, leaving scientists 2 and 3 in the lab.

-shots of scientist 1 walking calmly away from the building.

-cut away to the lab where four men proceed to detain the two scientists.
 a fifth man enters the building and says to the scientists  "where is it"

-one of the scientists replies  "its gone"

-fifth man whips out his mobile phone [with credits on screen]

-calls a number and says  "I need you to find someone"

-cut away to guy on other end of phone  "consider it...done"  [shot of only the lower quarter of face and mobile phone]

- cut back to the lab. fifth man says "lets go. bring them with you"  put potato sacks on the scientists heads,
take them outside, and put one in the back of each car, then proceed to drive away.

-fade to black

-fade back into the scientist walking down a street, mid-afternoon/ evening, with the briefcase in hand

-proceeds to turn down an alleyway and walks a few meters,
 at which point he looks behind him and sees the silhouette of a man in a hat behind him.

-he turns his head back and sees the silhouette of another man in a hat  {so he is effectively trapped}.

-he stops and begins to asses his options, at which point the two men begin to walk towards him.

-the scientist begins to panic, and drops the briefcase onto the floor, revealing the three vials.

-the men in suits and hats increase their pace towards the scientist as he desperately tries to pick up the vials
 and place them back into the briefcase.


-final shot. an Ariel view of the two men in suits on either side of the scientist [one in front, one behind].