Today we received our first lot of feedback from our peers, firstly we cut out Theo's dialogue on the phone because we were told that it was hard to hear/understand what he was saying, overall we thought it wasn't necessary. We re-filmed the lab scenes to make the narrative easier to understand. We used more lighting in the lab scenes. When we do the sound we will add a phone sound just at the end of the establishing shot, making a sound bridge. To make the scene of Theo walking at the end seem less like it is dragging on/too long we will put some credit there so we can direct the audiences attention as nothing major is happening.
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